What do you think about this CV ?

Thảo luận trong 'CÁC VẤN ĐỀ CHUYÊN NGÀNH & TÀI LIỆU TIẾNG ANH' bắt đầu bởi ngocxit117, 30/3/09.

  1. QUY ĐỊNH DIỄN ĐÀN
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    - Chỉ được phép đăng bài Tuyển dụng trong lĩnh vực nhân sự, hành chính và liên quan
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  1. ngocxit117

    ngocxit117 New Member

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    OBJECTIVE


    I am willing to become a professional officer in Sales section. I am in with the knowledge and capability that I have, in order to achieve organization’s goals and creates mutual benefits.


    PERSONAL INFORMATIONS


    Date of Birth:


    Từ này bị hạn chế: Female


    Married status: Single


    Health: Good


    EDUCATION


    10/2008 – present Huflit


    Bachelor of Science (Second Degree)


    Subject: English


    4/2008 – present Computer Center of Vietnam National University


    Technician


    Subject: Multimedia design


    2004 – 2008 Open University, HCMC


    Bachelor of Business


    Subjects: HR Management


    2001 – 2004 Nguyen Thi Minh Khai High school


    WORK EXPERIENCES


    October 2008 – present: Ryu’s Shop


    Sale


    To keep control on financial and saling activities of shop.


    4/2008 - 9/2008 : Kim Long Ltd


    Sale


    Customer consultant


    02/2008 - 04/2008: Binh Quoi Tourist Village (Trainee)


    Input data.


    To draft contracts of employment.


    CAPABILITIES


    Enthusiastic, responsible, friendly, optimistic, open-minded and creative. Able to work hard, independently or team-work.


    Good at diplomatic and consultant


    Interested in business, economy, communication, teamwork, youth and social activities.


    Have a sense of work plus humor, get on easily with people of all ages and backgrounds.


    Moderate at:


    IT/technology knowledge


    Office software and skills


    Design software and skills


    CAREER TARGETS


    To be an excellent staff, in order to work in a professional department.


    Try my best to learn as much as possible, accumulate experience, and work hard to complete my jobs.


    To have chance to prove my abilities & skills in business, especially sale support.


    To have good opportunities to get promotion in my career.
     
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  2. huongvan

    huongvan Thành viên BQT Phú Thọ

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    Hay, rõ ràng, "xinh"... :p


    Anh không thạo tiếng nước ngoài lắm nên không giúp em được gì rồi...
     
  3. Suhri

    Suhri Ban quản trị Đồng Nai

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    Dear Ngọc,


    I have read your CV, its quiet normal and not so interested. Please find attached file below of CV sample for your information.

    CV.pdf
     

    Các file đính kèm:

  4. HRvnplus

    HRvnplus New Member

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    ngocxit117 là boy nha bạn. Cảnh giác cao độ với nicknam :lol:


    Xem chữ ký của ngocxit117 nè
     
  5. juliehemery

    juliehemery Guest

    Hi Mr. Huongvan, could you speak in English on this forum please?


    If you understand what we've writen, I'm sure you can speak!


    Sincerely,


    Julie
     
  6. ngocxit117

    ngocxit117 New Member

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    Dear,


    Thanks for your comment. I read sample CV. It's useful to write a CV.
     
  7. ngocxit117

    ngocxit117 New Member

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    Sao anh nghi em la con trai? Dung voi nhan xet qua cai ten.HIHIHI
     
  8. Suhri

    Suhri Ban quản trị Đồng Nai

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    It is mention FEMALE in Ngocxit117's CV, any mistaken here??
     
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  9. rivalsumo

    rivalsumo Kết nối cộng đồng

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    Hà Nội
    Please,
     
  10. Hoang.Pham

    Hoang.Pham New Member

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    Đồng ý với Ms Suhri về cái quite normal and not so interested, đúng hơn thì nothing interested vì mấy cái dòng trên này ở CV nào cũng thấy ghi tương tự vậy, sau khi tuyển vào thì chẳng thấy mấy ai vậy cả ;)
     
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  11. Suhri

    Suhri Ban quản trị Đồng Nai

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    Dear Hoang Pham,


    Please kindly understand that we are using English in this club. Hence, we are preferring English language for our skill improvement.


    We appreciate for your co-operation.


    Warm regards,


    Suhri
     
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  12. Kusano

    Kusano Thành viên BQT Nha Trang

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    I'm sure ngocxit117 is female in CV


    The CV is normal, ít's mean " thường thường" and every student in HCMC could do better.
     
  13. Hoang.Pham

    Hoang.Pham New Member

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    Oh really, sorry I did not know about it. BTW, great to use English.
     
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  14. ngocxit117

    ngocxit117 New Member

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    That's a reason why i cannot find a job :) . Anyway, thanks for your advices.
     
  15. linhnguyenhuong

    linhnguyenhuong New Member

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    Sắp tới em có dự định apply vào một công ty kiểm toán, các anh chị xem giup em Resume được không ạ?


    Em cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều


    NGUYEN HUONG LINH


    Adress


    Tel


    Email


    OBJECTIVE


    To obtain a career in Audit at PWC to successful apply my knowledge of accounting and auditing theory and to have practical audit experience.


    EDUCATION


    National Economic University


    • GPA: 7.61 to the nearest academic year


    • Concentration: Auditing; member of English Auditing Class in NEU


    • Expected date of graduation June 2009


    Association of Chartered Certified Accountant


    • Certified Accounting Technician student


    • Score of T1 ___ 100 points


    T2 ___ 82 points


    T3 ___ 83 points


    T4 ___ 94 points


    T6 ___ 79 points


    T7 ___ 70 points


    • Expected date of completion June 2009


    ACHIEVEMENT


    • World top prize winner of T1 “Recording financial transaction”


    • One of the students having the highest mark (9 over 10) in the entrance test for Internship of AASC.


    EXPERIENCE


    Auditing and Accounting Financial Consultancy Service Company (AASC)/ Auditing Department/ Internship (January- April 2009) Responsibility


    • Carried out Test of Control and Substantive Test of Cash and Bank, Administration Expense.


    • Carried out Substantive Test of Inventory, Fixed Asset and Trade Payable.


    • Prepared Findings and Recommendations to be reviewed and then be contained in the management letter.


    • Provided assistance to individuals in Audit Team to ensure Audit completion was timely.


    • Arrange Audit Files, input Data for processing, made photocopy for the purpose of audit evidence.


    Trang Thi Commercial Centre/ Accounting Department/ Internship (April- June 2008)


    • Entered Data into Accounting Software


    • Carried out Bank Reconciliation


    • Performed general office procedures: Photocopying,


    • Filling and Answering the phone.


    Home Tutor (2005-2008)


    • Taught pupils of different level in Subjects: Maths and English


    • Excellent teaching and motivating skill


    OTHER SKILLS


    Computer: Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Project


    Language: Proficient: English
     
  16. setco

    setco Moderator

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    E nên viết chi tiết CV của e hơn nữa. Bổ sung thêm phần experience, phần sở thích, thông tin về người đánh giá. Bổ sung CV tiếng việt. Nếu e để như thế này thì a với tư cách là nhà tuyển dụng thì CV của e chỉ đc a xem qua và chuyển qua bên loại do các thông tin chưa đủ gây ấn tượng.
     
  17. tieudu

    tieudu New Member

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    Dear Everyone,


    Please review my CV and leave any comments if you can. I am a recent graduate looking for job in VN after my graduate in Aus. Maybe there are differences between how to write CV in Aus and in VN, or my CV isn't interesting enough I haven't received any calls for interview :(


    I have to delete my Personal Info and the email of my Reference for my personal secure..


    Thank you in advance..


    OBJECTIVE


    To gain an assistant position which I can utilize my qualifications and interest in Economics and Finance, in combination with my excellent interpersonal skills as well as research expertise. To work effectively and contribute to the development of the organization.


    COMPETENCIES


    • Strong interpersonal skills developed in customer service role at Red Rooster Foods Company.


    • Strong research expertise with high level of attention to details and solid quantitative skills.


    • Strong presentation skills and confidence demonstrated by presentations in different topics for academic assignments and lecture bashing for AIESEC organization during recruitment campaign.


    • Experienced user of Microsoft Word, PowerPoint and Excel, Internet and Email.


    TEAM WORKING & LEADERSHIP


    • Worked in a team of 8 or 10 at Red Rooster serving 200 – 300 customers per day.


    • Planning and coordination role taken in university group assignments – achieved an overall average 70+ % grade in group assessments.


    • Organized Microsoft UnCheating Event for 20 AIESEC members providing information about technology development and Microsoft Softwares on October 2008.


    EDUCATION


    Curtin University of Technology, Perth, WA, Australia 7/2007 – 6/2009


    Bachelor of Commerce majoring in Economics and Finance.


    WORK EXPERIENCES


    Red Rooster Foods Company Ltd. , Customer Service (Part Time) 8/2008 – 6/2009


    • Provided clear product details to customers.


    • Operated cash register and accepted payments.


    • Handled customers’ complaints.


    • Provided basic training to new staffs.


    Curtin University of Technology, Research Assistant (Part Time) 2/2008 – 11/2008


    • Provided general office support including photocopying, sorting and filling data


    • Undertook quantitative and qualitative research under requirements.


    EXTRA CURRILAR ACTIVITIES


    AIESEC Curtin – Education and Training Coordinator 7/2008 – 4/2009


    • In charge of preparing and organizing skill training sections for AIESEC members


    • Conducted monthly surveys of demanded skills


    • Reported to AIESEC Talent Management Director


    Curtin Volunteer PC Champ Project Member 7/2008 – 11/2008


    • Provided weekly computer mentoring for first year students who were lack of basic computer skills


    ACHIVEMENTS


    • Worked in team of 4 doing Business Capstone project won the competition in school with final group score of 5.83/6 in Semester 1, 2009.


    • 3 times received the letter of congratulations from the Vice-Chancellor for achieving excellent academic results in Semester 1/2007 and 1-2/2008.


    + Average Course Grade: 77.68/100 - Membership of the Vice-Chancellor's List is a recognition of academic excellence. Membership of the Vice-Chancellor's List is granted at the completion of each semester to the top 1% of undergraduates across all disciplines.


    REFERENCES


    Ms Amy Dent


    Store Manager, Red Rooster Foods Company
     

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